Comprehensive conclusion with supporting references
Good range of references used overall but could be further strengthened
Areas to consider for future assignments:
Develop more perspectives on the cultural competence of the midwife
Analyse the role of the midwife using research and demonstrate your understanding from this. How does the midwife support normality in a complex situation?
Convey a client centred approach in your writin Develop pointsmade/consider sequencing of points raised/use examples to fully explain claims or statements to demonstrate your understanding
Provide a synopsis of significant studies cited and comment on their strengths and limitations. Ensure research used has application to the UK
Present ideas on the design and challenges for future research in the chosen area
References could be expanded to include more midwifery journals – recent views/findings
Review your work to consider whether you are describing or critically discussing