Well, yes, but how can this be achieved? The claim should be specific in terms of explaining how health care facilities might help make this happen more effectively.

English 102 – Source Analysis Assignment

This was my working claim …
Patient Safety
Healthcare workers should place extreme focus on patient safety in an effort to avoid or reduce harm to patients while in their care.

My professor’s notes on this …
Well, yes, but how can this be achieved? The claim should be specific in terms of explaining how health care facilities might help make this happen more effectively.